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Scene From Mags by tribble-of-doom Scene From Mags by tribble-of-doom

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Yo, critique would be wonderful! Had to write a short scene and a treatment for screenwriting class, any suggestions greatly appreciated <3
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Hi-TuVy Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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Panthera--Shadow Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student General Artist
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STAR-GAZ3RR Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it, your descriptions are amazing and the entire screenwrite is wonderful to read.
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kyoukokirigi Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, that's a really good screenwrite! I can feel the emotion from both Maggie and Jack. Your writing style is really good, and I love the way you describe things.
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Flameclaw101 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Coolio! Great job Tribble!
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21kittyluver Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I love it!
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DreamingJay34 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your first name is Madeleine!!! One of my BEST FRIENDS in school has the name Madeleine. Everyone calls her Maddy though. Coincidence? I think not :iconmeanplz:
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DreamingJay34 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome by the way :D sorry I got side tracked by your wonderful name!!! :)
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MagTehPapillon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
My name is Maggie- and my brothers name is Jack... Whoa. o.o

Love it though Tribbs! ^^
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