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Yo, critique would be wonderful! Had to write a short scene and a treatment for screenwriting class, any suggestions greatly appreciated <3
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~TuVaisDeVela Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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~Panthera--Shadow Nov 29, 2012  Student General Artist
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~CloudyTheWolf Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it, your descriptions are amazing and the entire screenwrite is wonderful to read.
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=VajikTheChimera Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, that's a really good screenwrite! I can feel the emotion from both Maggie and Jack. Your writing style is really good, and I love the way you describe things.
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Coolio! Great job Tribble!
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~21kittyluver Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I love it!
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~Jayfeather34 Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your first name is Madeleine!!! One of my BEST FRIENDS in school has the name Madeleine. Everyone calls her Maddy though. Coincidence? I think not :iconmeanplz:
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~Jayfeather34 Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome by the way :D sorry I got side tracked by your wonderful name!!! :)
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Mood: Eye Candy ~MagTehPapillon Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
My name is Maggie- and my brothers name is Jack... Whoa. o.o

Love it though Tribbs! ^^
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