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the nails still seem to be crooked.

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sweetness, well, you have that light coming out of the top left corner, maybe the rain should reflect a little bit of that?

one of the claws is crooked... *cant stop staring at it* @_@

lol the rest is absolutely fabulous~

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Well the rain is pointing in the oposite direction to me it looks that way, it should flow a little down more rain dosent fall usualy too straight, other then that I love how you did the eyes and the light Great work on this tribbs

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I haven't got a premium, so I can't actually post a crit on the critique thing, but here's mine.

First of all, the writing on the picture is very detracting from the piece. May I suggest adding some opacity to the text, or removing it altogether.
Your lining is very bumpy in some places, so you may want to re-line or smooth them out. A great technique is to increase the size of the picture before lining by about 50% and then decreasing it after lining by the same amount.
I think that the shading is very good (you may want to decrease the highlights on the eyes a bit) and the ray of light adds a very cool "parting-of-the-clouds" effect. A bit less yellow would make it look even better, since light isn't actually yellow.
The rain in the background looks very good, but the foreground rain seems sloppy and large. May I suggest adding opacity/thinning it out, particularly the misting around the wolf, and that section of the wolf's back, where a puddle seems to have formed. As far as I know, water can't defy gravity, so it looks like it's just floating there.
There's a spot below the head to the left where there's no rain (was the spot the paw was originally). You might want to add some rain there, and clean up the colouring, because there are random blotches of colour left over from the paw. And speaking of your colouring, you need to watch your lines. Going over afterwards and erasing the colour outside the lines is tedious (especially for a large scale drawing) but it's worth it in the end.
Last but not least, the claw on the forepaw is skewed (a bunch of people have mentioned it, so I'm sure you've already been made aware)

Compositionally and unity wise, it's very good. Though the wolf is centered, I think it works well with everything else. Good job.

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i would say make the water a little more clear...