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I Will Make You Hurt by tribble-of-doom I Will Make You Hurt by tribble-of-doom
Time off I've had time to think about stories again and here's a scene from "She" when a character named Vadmin's wife is dragged from their home in the night, and when he runs out looking for her her throat has been slit. And its his fault 'cause he's the one with powerful enemies. So he feels awful and becomes a badass after the end.

I tried using just black to shade and it looks kinda weird but whatever I'm experimenting.
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TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't even notice the song lyrics at first glance, that song is perfect, and the way you incorporated it in here is just splendid. I love the white drips from her body, it really makes her stand out more.

This makes me sound perverse, but Just curious, why does the dude's crotch just look like scratchy lines?
Ray534 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! I like how much the blood contrasts with the rest of it, and his expression looks really good :D
DarkInsanity2359 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
This is really well done!

Kinda weird, I've been listening to this song for the past few minutes on repeat when I saw this.....
feliuskatus Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NIN <3
AnukeorSplatter Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My brother plays this song very well on the guitar-- gives me goosebumps every time. I like how you applied it- slightly different from my point of view, but awesome nevertheless :3
Tannaquil Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a pretty cool-looking experiment.
Danny-Senpai Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
shadowwolf35 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Artist
This amazing
merpyfrost Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
It's good to experiment. Learning to use different shading styles will definitely allow you to give your art a better atmosphere. But there are a lot of anatomical errors, as you probably already know. What bothers me the most is with the wife; she's waaay too skinny, inhumanly skinny, beyond the limits of human anatomy, pretty much. Also, on the composition and the shading... There's a lot of messiness. (don't take that personally, though) The white outline around the wife is very distracting, and would be better off not being there. The shading on the wife's hair is excessively detailed. Try to go more for simple, definite, and precise. It may also be better to keep all the blood in one shade and hue, to fit with the rest of the drawing. And I have one more thing-- it's not really a crucial detail at all. The throat wound. Consider what ~Steeltalon said...

"Nice pic. Needs moar blood though. When the carotid artery and the jugular vein are cut, the blood literally spurts and gushes out. You bleed out in about six seconds, give or take."

The cut also seems a little low. But that's just what I think from how I draw.

I hope you find this useful. I really think you're doing a good job. And I can't wait to see how your story works out. That's what I'm most interested in!
tribble-of-doom Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankies so much for the crit! :D

And I'm working ont he story again, so hopefully you'll like it :P
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